ODOP: untitled x

Just playing around with sound today, and I think it was a worthy experiment. If it actually meant anything then it would be a good snippet.

the voice whispered in your stomach
“go to the garden”
and going glorious into the garden
you viewed windy stirrings
growing gracious in the garden
reaching wildly to skies
ungraspable by godlings.
resplendent you went to see
great gifts ungazable
realizing nothing, suspended
(poor gopher glomped aboveground!)
unruffled you kneeled supplication
(blessed gopher gandering aboveground!)

received you nosegays from birds
rare and neverseen beauties
going grandly on the gusts
higher, swifter out of sight

Copyright 2010 Jobey George

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